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Amnesia


Author: Themissingshado
ASL Info:    22/male/Seattle
Elite Ratio:    2.27 - 23 /52 /32
Words: 338
Class/Type: Lyrics /Depressed
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Amnesia



Alone i sit on the porch
of a house that use to be yours
a cigarette in between my fingers
memories of you continue to linger
Remember the tire swing in your backyard
and how i push you on it under the stars
even though it's gone sometimes it's hard to keep on moving forward

Sometimes i think you forgot who i am
and what we have and everything we've been through
our hearts collided but their tearing in two
what happens time stops without you
will you forget
will you regret
or will you look back and say you still love me...

I tighten my scarf
as i the cold sinks in
and the rain gently begins again
i pull from my pocket what's left of us
a picture of you and I
remember when we were happy
you brought a smile to my face
Look at the memories you're trying to erase.

Sometimes i think you forgot who i am
and what we have and everything we've been through
our hearts collided but their tearing in two
what happens time stops without you
will you forget
will you regret
or will you look back and say you still love me...

we were at the climax, where will we go... how will get there, i don't know... but which ever way we fall it can't be worse than this life... right, now....

Sometimes i think you forgot who i am
Looking back to the days of what we use to have
our hearts collided and they tore us in two
But i'll let you know now i still love you....

Sometimes i think you forgot who i am
and what we have and everything we've been through
our hearts collided but their tearing in two
what happens time stops without you
will you forget
will you regret
or will you look back and say you still love me...

Sometimes i think you forgot who i was to you....




Submitted on 2008-03-19 19:10:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  ah, the lament for a lost love...ever old and ever new... nicely and deftly done here, no question .... I liked it muchly .... bravo... bravo... barvo...
| Posted on 2008-03-20 00:00:00 | by Algol46 | [ Reply to This ]


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