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    dots Submission Name: But I Do.dots
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    Author: wovenwords
    ASL Info:    17/F/the sea
    Elite Ratio:    2.59 - 106/271/143
    Words: 154
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 86
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 970



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       Sometimes the simplest way to say it is the best way.


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    dotsBut I Do.dots
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    I know
    that you had a cat for 16 years
    and it was your best friend for five
    and you really don't like cats now
    but I do.

    And I know
    that you had a red-haired girl for two years
    and you loved her on the seaside
    and you'll never get over your first love
    but I will.

    And I know
    that all you do is lie around
    and your motivation melted in the sun years ago
    and your brain is filled with air
    but mine's not.

    And I know
    that you're more serious than you wish
    and you'll have frown line wrinkles when you're old and gray
    and your heart is a little constricted from the wear of the years
    but mine's not.

    And I know
    that you like to write
    but it's only humorous stuff
    and you don't understand my poetry, at all,
    but I do,
    I do.




    Submitted on 2008-03-20 02:18:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      It takes you through series of times and that feel in itself exudes nostalgia.

    I thought it was very well and simply constructed. My favorite stanza was the fourth one. I suppose I understand why Lucy and Anna thought this could be sad...but it's not exactly sad though.

    Hmm...

    Suven
    | Posted on 2008-03-22 00:00:00 | by Suven7 | [ Reply to This ]
      I'm not sure how this made me feel. It was like sad and then I'm not really sure. But that's not a bad thing. I love is when poetry confuses my emotions :P

    Anna
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    | Posted on 2008-03-21 00:00:00 | by Aethyx | [ Reply to This ]
      :-( This made me feel really sad. But I liked it...

    And that's really all I have to say...
    | Posted on 2008-03-20 00:00:00 | by LucyDiamond | [ Reply to This ]



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