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I know that you had a cat for 16 years and it was your best friend for five and you really don't like cats now but I do. And I know that you had a red-haired girl for two years and you loved her on the seaside and you'll never get over your first love but I will. And I know that all you do is lie around and your motivation melted in the sun years ago and your brain is filled with air but mine's not. And I know that you're more serious than you wish and you'll have frown line wrinkles when you're old and gray and your heart is a little constricted from the wear of the years but mine's not. And I know that you like to write but it's only humorous stuff and you don't understand my poetry, at all, but I do, I do. |
It takes you through series of times and that feel in itself exudes nostalgia. I thought it was very well and simply constructed. My favorite stanza was the fourth one. I suppose I understand why Lucy and Anna thought this could be sad...but it's not exactly sad though. Hmm... Suven | Posted on 2008-03-22 00:00:00 | by Suven7 | [ Reply to This ] | I'm not sure how this made me feel. It was like sad and then I'm not really sure. But that's not a bad thing. I love is when poetry confuses my emotions :P | Anna <Aethyx> | Posted on 2008-03-21 00:00:00 | by Aethyx | [ Reply to This ] | :-( This made me feel really sad. But I liked it... | And that's really all I have to say... | Posted on 2008-03-20 00:00:00 | by LucyDiamond | [ Reply to This ] | |