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    dots Submission Name: That Angeldots
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    Author: Aethyx
    ASL Info:    14/f/sc
    Elite Ratio:    4.04 - 25/23/15
    Words: 145
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 781
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1030



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       I'm not really sure about this poem. Interesting is the only thing I could say about this poem.


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    dotsThat Angeldots
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    Like an angel with those broken wings
    So beautiful and yet so sad

    That angel longs to fly
    But is constantly being held back

    That angel longs to die
    But the razors have been snatched

    That angel longs to cry
    But those tears have long since been dry

    That angel wants to heal
    But you've ripped those wounds open again

    That angel is a little girl
    And also that old man
    That angel is everyone
    Who has ever had that plan

    That plan to fly
    ---------It failed

    That plan to die
    ---------It failed

    That plan to cry
    ---------It failed

    That plan to heal
    ---------It failed

    What does that angel have
    ------------------------Nothing

    And yet that angel
    Pushes along
    Humming softly

    That angel still wants to die
    But keeps fighting on





    Submitted on 2008-03-20 12:20:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Correct me if I'm wrong, but I think this is about how everybody wants to help someone at some point in their life, but can't. Despite this they struggle on in life?

    Anyways, I think the only thing I would change is that the 5th verse says want instead of long, like all the ones before that, and that kinda messed up the flow.
    | Posted on 2008-03-30 00:00:00 | by entropy | [ Reply to This ]


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