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That Angel

Author: Aethyx
ASL Info:    14/f/sc
Elite Ratio:    4.04 - 25 /23 /15
Words: 145
Class/Type: Poetry /Depressed
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I'm not really sure about this poem. Interesting is the only thing I could say about this poem.

That Angel

Like an angel with those broken wings
So beautiful and yet so sad

That angel longs to fly
But is constantly being held back

That angel longs to die
But the razors have been snatched

That angel longs to cry
But those tears have long since been dry

That angel wants to heal
But you've ripped those wounds open again

That angel is a little girl
And also that old man
That angel is everyone
Who has ever had that plan

That plan to fly
---------It failed

That plan to die
---------It failed

That plan to cry
---------It failed

That plan to heal
---------It failed

What does that angel have

And yet that angel
Pushes along
Humming softly

That angel still wants to die
But keeps fighting on

Submitted on 2008-03-20 12:20:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Correct me if I'm wrong, but I think this is about how everybody wants to help someone at some point in their life, but can't. Despite this they struggle on in life?

Anyways, I think the only thing I would change is that the 5th verse says want instead of long, like all the ones before that, and that kinda messed up the flow.
| Posted on 2008-03-30 00:00:00 | by entropy | [ Reply to This ]

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