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    dots Submission Name: Three Simple Wordsdots
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    Author: Peggy Paris
    ASL Info:    60/F/USA
    Elite Ratio:    4.12 - 721/557/166
    Words: 128
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    Hope, Dream, and Believe---
    Their pow'r of thought has much to weave
    When, minds and hearts, appreciate
    What energy they radiate.

    When Hope takes chance and turns it free,
    Hope sets the stage for harmony.
    Hope's sense of trust defies all odds
    To send each heart confirming nods.

    To Dream sustains that inner grace
    That warms the soul and cheers the face.
    In Dreams, we stretch beyond mundane
    And find, sublime, what once was plain.

    Believe and confidence is thine
    To stand right on life's cutting line;
    Accepting this ability
    Shall take life's fears and set them free.

    Through good and bad and come what may,
    One message lifts us o'er life's fray
    Containing words to which we'll cleave:
    Hope, Dream, and Believe!




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    ||| Comments |||
      Sharon, this is a very upbeat piece that touches on things most positive. Frank and Ron beat me to most of the superlatives so I will end by saying ....nice job.

    Pete
    | Posted on 2008-06-07 00:00:00 | by ErgoIgo | [ Reply to This ]
      Very well written sharon. As Ron rightly says, form, structure and your choice of words are perfect and this was a joy to read.

    Frank.
    | Posted on 2008-03-23 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
      Yes! Hope * Dream * Believe!!! You know that many of my sharings revolve around those very words and this was just flawlessly executed and spot on!
    Always enjoy your offerings! Keep up the positive energy - it can change the world

    love,peace,joy,abundance & smiles to share
    tif
    | Posted on 2008-03-21 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
      This is delightful! It not only has an excellent structure and rhyme scheme, but it spins an outstanding philosophical yarn! Messages of faith and hope are always needed, and verse such as this does much good and promotes much healing!

    Ya done great on this one, lovely lady!!! Bravo!
    | Posted on 2008-03-20 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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