Description: As I said, that concert changed me so much. Woke me up. Showed me so much. I'm like... crawling out of a hole right now. And it's beautiful.
Imploding infers zero-gravity- therefor muted... -Absence of space... I get this floating honey-orb/womb. All just floating... Silenced/deafened... Then escape!
I'm babbling!!! -Too much Chai...
I liked this one!!! I read a few of your others too, just have not had time to comment...
I liked the spacing you used- each word hit like a punch...
I can make a suggestion, though- if the spacing was equal in each one- it would look nicer aesthetically...
Like- "honey" is 26 spaces away from the beginning. So make "on mute" and "breaks" and the rest all 26 spaces also... So it's more uniform in it's insanity.
"Oh, it's so indulgent!" Hahaha, yeah it is! -I loved the use of that line...
Submission Name: Awakening
