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Author: lah
ASL Info:    20/F/Thousand oaks
Elite Ratio:    2.23 - 26 /47 /36
Words: 207
Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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So maybe its Ironic
Each placement of people in my life
the whole
right place, right time, right moment
Maybe its not irony at all
maybe its purpose

I'ld like to think i have a purpose
Like to think that theres reason and fate
I'ld also like to think that all of this
will pay off in the end

maybe its just my heart for yours
We think purpose in terms of greatness
In terms of happiness and satisfaction
Since when is that written anywhere

Maybe its my lack of happiness that creates yours
Maybe its my pain for your well being
And maybe you'll forget me
Maybe my purpose is to be forgotten

Then again maybe a little better then that
what if i am just a memory
maybe i'm just a moment in time your supposed to expierience
Maybe I'm just the possobility

and if i am could anyone else do it better
If I'm just the memory one of your significant memories am i also what could be
that one thing that sounds amazing but you'll take this instead
cause i get that alot

Maybe my purpose is to show you what you really want

Submitted on 2008-03-21 01:03:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  strong poem!

i think it's really good.

The structure is really strong and the first stanza's my favourite.

and i think you've doena great job.

| Posted on 2008-03-21 00:00:00 | by crazijessi | [ Reply to This ]

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