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    dots Submission Name: To Bedots
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    Author: forfila
    Elite Ratio:    3.12 - 354/310/188
    Words: 109
    Class/Type: Misc/Love
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    dotsTo Bedots
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    Moving through one more dance
    Holding you in my arms
    Living a spiritual romance
    I have you
    This is our time at last

    No demons to confess
    Love
    No more
    Or no less
    This dream is so intense

    I dream of no brighter days
    Living now, for nothing do we wait
    Holding on to your hand
    Knowing just what we have
    Knowing we both understand

    Walking in this garden free
    This stage of love, singing for you and me
    The breeze puts our minds at ease
    This is not the time to think
    This is the time to be.

    2008 Matthew






    Submitted on 2008-03-21 03:39:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I love it when people live in the moment.
    Live for now, this moment, each one is well you know what I mean. good write.

    The Poor Man's Poet.
    | Posted on 2008-03-22 00:00:00 | by Bobby K | [ Reply to This ]
      This great, Matt! Living in the moment, and loving in the moment! The time for love is, always, "now"!
    | Posted on 2008-03-21 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      Nicely done throughout, a poem of fine romance very well put together... I liked it muchly .... bravo... bravo... bravo...
    | Posted on 2008-03-21 00:00:00 | by Algol46 | [ Reply to This ]


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