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    dots Submission Name: your waking body magikdots

    Author: blackbird
    ASL Info:    31/male/reykjavik iceland
    Elite Ratio:    2.35 - 194/328/300
    Words: 140
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsyour waking body magikdots

    where in the wild darkness
    will i find you?
    in the sky,
    where the wind comes into you
    like it does?

    when will the muted colours inside me
    become where your hands belong?
    they're already there
    & the maze of your living heart
    is open towards some soft place
    to call your own amongst me.

    the gifts of my tongue
    are smaller than the ones
    in my chest.
    & although i seem cryptic
    in the thick of ghosts around you,
    i'll let each secret slip from me
    as the past recedes.

    i remember how to melt softly
    into the devils of the field.
    but as i fall
    into some version of milky sleep
    without you,
    i wonder where you are.
    so i'll meet you
    where fog creeps between eyelids
    into your waking body magik
    & my own.

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      I like this one. I think it's representative of your work I've read so far. There always a feeling that something is missing a longing of some sorts present in your work. I've noticed that too in other artists from your country. It's like you all love that place in a way but you want something else. Iceland is not the most romantic place on earth now is it? It has a redeeming quality though. It's brutally honest and that's what I'm searching for and I want to see in your work. Maybe you could recommend a poem where you think you reached that.
    | Posted on 2008-06-13 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ]

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