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    dots Submission Name: Chairs Don't Give A Fuck, Though...dots
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    Author: Ceyx
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    dotsChairs Don't Give A Fuck, Though...dots
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    Chairs Don't Give A Fuck, Though from the musical: Compatible Tables by Maguire Beck





    Green tea and herbal cigarettes gets
    Everything you can't miss out on
    Sandbags and lying to the dogs
    Will help you move along
    But won't get:
    You sunshine and rainbows
    -On a day inside a cell

    -Might as well go to Hel!

    Hel knows why a bird can fly-
    But I don't.
    Even murders fly in patterns-
    I won't.

    -Something to get good at
    Looking at compatible tables
    . . .chairs don't give a fuck, though.
    Looking through a window,
    -shopping.
    Dropping the flies and the lies of those who care
    -I donít give a fuck though!
    (even broke the window)
    -I'll share!
    Mannequins and butterflies
    On our holiday in Hel

    -Might as well go down

    town

    With a frown-

    down

    Spin round and

    round

    and sing!

    (Chairs still donít give a fuck, though. . .)






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      i love this one...it's like a. a. milne insane and raving inside a strait jacket...

    pooh bear with a chain saw and a grudge!

    rabbit on meth!

    beautifully clever.
    | Posted on 2008-04-13 00:00:00 | by ruejacobs | [ Reply to This ]


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