Description: thing in my life that I'm waiting fo to happen or get done and over with
here i sit -------------------------------------------
here I sit waiting for you
here I sit waiting for the moment that we can spring free of our hell whole's so were we can be free
here I sit waiting for you to take my hand and no one elses
here I am wondering when will this nightmare of my life be over so I can get back to more important things like my lady for one
here i sit waiting for one day to came were I walk out and never look back
here I am waiting for the day I become a dad hopefully
so what are you waiting for ?
Hmmm...interesting. Now, I dont get the last line though because the whole poem before that part seems to be about someone sitting around waiting for somone else to do something and never taking the time to think that perhaps the person they are waiting for to do something is sitting there waiting for them to do something too...ya know?
While I read this poem and got to the end I thought to myself, "Duh...they are waiting for YOU to do something meaningful for THEM!"
Anyway, if that was your message I think you got that point across quite well. Nice job on that part. Waiting takes the mind in too many odd directions where it shouldnt be.
Submission Name: here i sit 
