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Author: GoKart Mozart
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Words: 251
Class/Type: Poetry /Broken
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longest poem i've ever written?



You ask of me,
"Love, can you see
In the future,
You and me?"

I'll think for a moment
And answer Thee:

"In the future
I can see
-Together always-
You and Me.
But there's a catch,
My Love of Today,
These feelings between us
Will go away."

"What mean you,
My Dearest Girl?
You have my heart.
You're my whole world-"

"I know, I know.
I know it's true
Because, to me,
The same are you.

But time will change
I feel in my heart
That someday, Love,
We two shall part.
While that future
Looks so real,
The warmth I should
I cannot feel."

Thy sullen countenance upon me looks.
My words have brought to life your fears.

For a minute, you were vulnerable,
Your guard carefully let down.
You feel that i'm a traior
And you're letting your trust drown.

Your wall goes up,
I hear it now.
That nonchalance
Settles across your brow.

I know you care.
I know you do.
But you'll never admit
I got to you.

Do you give up now?
Just stop trying?
Tears in my eyes and
You act like you're not dying?

Was I just a lie to you?
Is that all it takes
To seal up your heart
As soon as it breaks?

Well i'll have you know
That mine's broken, too.
This is not at all the reaction
I expected from you...

Submitted on 2008-03-21 17:57:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Yeah, I reckon you are right...some reactions just aren't warranted. Like a wiseman once said..."All hail the mistakes of the children...for they guide the conscience of mankind." Wait...I think I just made that up. Hmmmm....yeah, I'm right, I just made that up. But I did hear it from the wind, so give the wind the credit.

Decent story telling in the form of a poem. That is always hard to do, you did a perdy darn good job of it. Its a fun style to write in isnt it? I do it once in a while too.

Thanks for sharing
| Posted on 2008-03-21 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]

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