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    dots Submission Name: Love at it's best!dots
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    Author: Fallyn Angel
    ASL Info:    19/F/CT
    Elite Ratio:    3.21 - 44/54/47
    Words: 71
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 82
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    Bytes: 425



    Description:
       Inspired by my boyfriend/ ES Husband Aion Kiori


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    dotsLove at it's best!dots
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    He never spoke one single word.
    Yet I heard everything.
    He never told me to do anything.
    Yet I did it all.
    He never taught me one single thing.
    Yet I know everything.
    He never touched me with his hands.
    Yet I know how he feels.
    He never explained anything to me.
    Yet I understood it all.
    He never had to say how he felt.
    I already knew he loved me.




    Submitted on 2008-03-21 20:18:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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