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    dots Submission Name: Falling Apartdots
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    Author: darkened_soul
    Elite Ratio:    3.38 - 812/868/171
    Words: 189
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 1217
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 1381



    Description:
       I was listening to the songs "Simple Livin" and "Pillmatic.". They inspired me to write in this particular style. Trav, you are my muse baby.


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    dotsFalling Apartdots
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    Last night I saw my world collide
    I knew the words were coming
    You should've just said goodbye
    It would've hurt less, but
    Probably would've made me cry.

    I just watched the cursor flash repeatedly
    This meant you'd be leaving me
    I just wanted to tell you I love you
    Make this right again.

    Too far to turn around.
    I've barely even made a sound.
    We're past the point of no return
    I guess I never learned.

    I tried to hard to change.
    Tried to see things differently.
    Nothing, just wasted attempts.
    You proved it on my screen.

    "I'll always need you around,
    You're a great friend."
    Ha, like that was what I wanted.
    But it's what I get.

    I came in on false pretenses
    Hoped I'd leave a love richer.
    Instead I leave confused.
    A broken mental picture.

    Friends? Baby, where's your head?
    I can't do that shit.
    I'm not strong enough to stand.
    I don't know what you're thinking.

    You've should've known better.
    I shouldn't have wrote that letter.
    Maybe we'd still be together.
    Not likely. Too late. It's over.




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