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    dots Submission Name: Smiles to tearsdots
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    Author: blankscreen
    ASL Info:    16/f/china
    Elite Ratio:    6.35 - 195/131/115
    Words: 166
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 71
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1124



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    dotsSmiles to tearsdots
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    His smile
    Fireworks in his eyes
    His cheeks get brighter
    words seem lighter

    Always joyful
    Until tears roll down his cheeks
    A cannonball that makes me weak
    Not letting me stand on my own two feet

    We panic in distress
    As the smile melts from his gentle cheeks
    We reach out to grab the stars
    To pacify his broken dreams

    But these are the moments I treasure most
    When he is vulnerable
    Unmanageable
    Distressed

    These are the times when he doesn't help me
    Because he can't
    Not emotionally stable
    Breaking down in front of me
    And not because he doesn't want to.

    These are the times when he isn't thinking about her
    The times when it isn't her face which runs in whisps through his thoughts
    A labrynth of torturous love
    These are the times when his arms are around me
    And not in some distant land

    But when he smiles
    He is her world
    Not mine.






    Submitted on 2008-03-22 06:01:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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