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    dots Submission Name: you there?dots
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    Author: blankscreen
    ASL Info:    16/f/china
    Elite Ratio:    6.35 - 195/131/115
    Words: 379
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 68
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1917



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    I need someone to talk to.

    What would you say if I told you

    My twin sister and I are depressed
    If I told you she had more of a reason than I do

    What would you say if I told you

    I am talking to her boyfriend and some random stranger she confides in
    so they can tell me what to do
    because she won’t talk to me
    And I don’t know why

    What would you say if I told you he loves me
    If I told you there is more than one
    And love scares me like crazy
    because I don’t know when I feel it and when I don’t

    And I don’t want to end up hurting anyone

    What would you say if I told you
    I followed the directions
    Straight through to the end
    And yet I didnt get the right conclusion
    instead things just got worse

    I told you that he told me to stand by her and tell her it hurt me too
    But then she just felt worse
    And I sat next to her just to hold her hand
    because really I just needed someone to hold mine

    But instead I made her relive it
    Until she wanted to do more than cry
    What would you say if I told you
    That I fake my smile everyday because I think it might make her happy
    And I think about attempting to commit suicide
    Because I can tell she doesn’t need me

    What would you say if I told you that I don’t want to tell you anything?
    Because the pain is too hard to bear
    When she finds out that we talk in secret
    And she can hear our whispers
    What would you say when I can’t talk to you any more
    Because I don’t want to steal you from her
    Because its not right to be stolen
    And she deserves more

    What would you say if I told you
    Its over.




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      If I may ask, how many times am I 'he'? How many times did I cause you this pain, this dilemma, that's driving you insane? Endless thoughts that keep racing through your brain. I'm rhyming again, I know I should stop. But when I can't find a smile, it's either this or pop. I wish there was a way, that I could make it better. Then I wouldn't feel so helpless, dejected to the letter. For when you hurt, I hurt. When you smile, I smile. And any time you need me, I'll be here for a while. Now that we have said our piece, and got that off our chest. Maybe we could all sit down, and figure out what's best.
    | Posted on 2008-03-29 00:00:00 | by Swimming Bird | [ Reply to This ]



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