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    dots Submission Name: If it had been medots
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    Author: blankscreen
    ASL Info:    16/f/china
    Elite Ratio:    6.35 - 195/131/115
    Words: 182
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsIf it had been medots
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    If it had been me
    I would have tried not to tell you

    If it had been me
    I would have held it in until I exploded
    Or it faded away
    If it ever did

    If it had been me
    I would have kept caring
    I would have stayed there

    If it had been me
    I would have been grateful
    Because its easier to be the one being hurt
    Then the one doing the hurting

    At least in my opinion

    If it had been me
    I would have stayed up all night just writing
    It could have been my inspiration

    If it had been me
    I might be able to survive
    Even though it hurts already

    And it would hurt even more if they yelled at me
    And raped me

    But they couldn't ever rape my thoughts or my dreams
    They couldn't ever forcefully take what was within me

    If it had been me
    you would have never been hurt
    You would be ok

    And thats all that matters
    to me.




    Submitted on 2008-03-22 06:13:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      A most potent and strong piece of poerty a bit mysterious, but that is all to the good...so noble thoughts here as well.... bravo... bravo.. bravo... michael
    | Posted on 2008-07-10 00:00:00 | by Algol46 | [ Reply to This ]



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