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    Author: isaiahc4
    ASL Info:    26/M/TX
    Elite Ratio:    3.26 - 120/198/62
    Words: 172
    Class/Type: Poetry/Venting
    Total Views: 480
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    my life is getting harder
    things far more complex
    things that use to bring me joy
    are all now my regrets.

    these situations arising
    make it hard to cope.
    I feel as though I just fell off
    attached to a short rope.

    my anxieties are gaining strength
    my fears they overwhelm
    this place that used to be my home
    now feel like another relm

    I feel I live in fantasy
    like I can't wake from this dream.
    more like a nightmare
    what good can this bring

    I keep trying to escape
    I try to run away
    thinking if I make it
    I'll live another day

    though it's not my nature
    I'd rather stand and fight.
    Its getting even harder
    being this polite.

    I feel I'm turning
    into something weak.
    It's never been in me
    to stand and let you speak

    just let me be
    or let me pick my fight
    if you don't want to become it
    then get out of my sight.




    Submitted on 2008-03-22 08:41:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This an emotional piece b/c I've felt that way b4 not recently though.I like it,hey it's in my favs.Best thing I've read all weekend.4.5stars
    | Posted on 2008-03-22 00:00:00 | by Rex Gold | [ Reply to This ]


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