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    dots Submission Name: eyes like har megidodots
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    Author: caster
    ASL Info:    23.m.oh
    Elite Ratio:    3.6 - 126/215/118
    Words: 120
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
    Total Views: 141
    Average Vote:    4.5000
    Bytes: 857



    Description:
       about: 'har megido' is hebrew for 'hill of megiddo' which is the supposed place of armageddon. thus, the title can be translated as 'eyes like armageddon'.

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    dotseyes like har megidodots
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    overdramatic
    get your cinematic camera ready
    cause i’ve got a show for you
    god damn, i’m going to show you
    a thing
    or
    two.

    i can make a funeral danceable
    but i can't and won’t be held responsible
    for anyone
    who
    drops
    dead.

    anticlimactic
    get your automatic prejudice ready
    cause i’ve got a hanging rope for you
    god damn, i’m going to hang you
    just until
    you’re
    blue.

    oh, i know this didn’t mean a thing to you
    so let me be the one to prove
    break-ups and shake-ups can't
    break or shake up this armageddon boy.

    i can make a funeral danceable
    but i can't and won’t be held responsible
    for anyone
    who
    drops
    dead.




    Submitted on 2008-03-22 12:27:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      "i can make a funeral danceable
    but i can't and won’t be held responsible
    for anyone
    who
    drops
    dead."

    That is one of my favorite things I've ever read. It makes me smile... in a slightly creepy way.

    Every line of this is perfect, and I love the way it rhymes so naturally without seeming forced at all. It takes a lot of talent to pull that off.
    ...I guess you might be talented. Who woulda thought? ;)

    Awesome title, by the way. You always come up with the best titles.


    You're amazing.

    -nikkki
    | Posted on 2008-03-26 00:00:00 | by Razor2TheRosary | [ Reply to This ]



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