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Fireflies of Bora Bora


Author: Imadjinn
ASL Info:    17/M/Neverwhere
Elite Ratio:    4.27 - 340 /348 /146
Words: 139
Class/Type: Lyrics /Misc
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I went to a concert on the 20th, and much to my surprise, the lead Gig (Jason Webley) wanted us to write a song, and then perform it.

I'm happy the guys at Sauced let us stay that late, eat there if you're ever in OKC


Fireflies of Bora Bora



The fireflys of Bora Bora
shining bright tonight
the Blind Eyed albino man
told me so

The Sky is raining bicycles
come and join the fight
I'm 39 tonight
I ought to know

In a van with a really swell band
driving all the way from Dallas
to Oklahoma City, it sure was pretty
as aurora's borealis

They say a twister can't be tamed
no a twister can't be tamed
Sisters man your cannons
Brothers take your aim

The fireflys of Bora Bora
shining bright tonight
the Blind Eyed albino man
told me so

The Sky is raining bicycles
come and join the fight
I'm 39 tonight
I ought to know

They say a twister can't be tamed
no a twister can't be tamed
Sisters man your cannons
Brothers take your aim




Submitted on 2008-03-22 23:51:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I always felt it was hard to show people lyrics when they haven't actually heard the song. It's almost like giving them half a painting and wanting them to see the genius of your masterpiece. Often they don't get the vision.

That being said I think the lyrics here are really intriguing and strong. Strong enough to make me want to hear the song. The imagery is very "reggae/traditional" adn thats how I picture the song sounding in my head. Like folk type guitars and a slow to moderate tempo. I don't know though I'd like to hear it.

Good Job.


KAM
| Posted on 2008-03-23 00:00:00 | by Mister Fizzle | [ Reply to This ]


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