i wish this wasn't so difficult -------------------------------------------
sometimes in life you think to your self
what do i have planned for my future?
sometimes i feel like im trapped in this little shell and i cant escape.
Right now im feeling like that.
ever wonder why everything is going completely wrong lately and you feel like there is never any hope for some peace for your suffereing?
i wish i could tolerate the things thrown at me in life such as
friends
family
school
jobs
and relationships.
its all to overwhelming for me to keep up with all of them.
i wish life wasn't as hard.
"but if life wasn't hard... it wouldn't be life" -Kristofer Miller
Kristofer has been there for me through thick and thin. He is the shelter in which i would long for my life to not live without. He has taught me so much things that i would never even think to have helped me before with my struggles, but his words and teachings in which he spoke n taught to me has inspired me to be the person i am today. He is not only a kind spirit, but a gentle one at that. He is a great soul and im sure, has a great future ahead of him. I wish life puts him where he is destined to be.
Life is tough and tougher for some. It is not bed of roses but has thorns too. Gloominess and gaiety are both part of life. Your poem needs to be improved in sequence and in rhythm. The theme of poem is good.
Submission Name: i wish this wasn't so difficult
