Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • ES Magazine
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • Video Tutorials
  • RolePlay
  • 90% off Amazon
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Questionable?dots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: _Osiris_
    ASL Info:    18 Chick Ottawa
    Elite Ratio:    0.47 - 1/5/56
    Words: 412
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Passion
    Total Views: 129
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 2613



    Description:
       Ive been having dreams and it seems to be revolving around the same general idea of being lost, scared and lonely. Until someone comes along and finds you, turns on the light and stands by your side.

    Im somewhat hoping that this might happen within the near future.


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsQuestionable?dots
    -------------------------------------------


    "Look into my eyes.
    You will see what you need to see.
    I cant promise you of what you seek will be real between you and me but I can promise you I'll try if you want me to."

    The boy looks into her eyes.
    Foreheads pressed against each other.
    Gazing into her crystal blues.
    Drowning within the depths of their darkness.
    Hoping to seek his anwsers to the questions that burn a hole within his soul.

    "How do I know your not just saying this?"

    "Cause if I really wanted you out of selfishness I would have gotten you already."

    The grip between their hands tightened.
    Bodies became close that a heart beat could be felt without a hand touching flesh.
    He took a long deep breath and focused on her.
    He realized that this whole time of him looking within her eyes he's never felt so close to someone.
    He knew he wanted to be with her.
    She knew that to.
    Though he always asked himself if he could pursue this feeling.
    This feeling he has for her.
    Knowing if he finds himself lost.
    She would be the one to find him everytime.

    "Can you stand right here with your eyes close while I think this through?"

    She didnt question him.
    Nor anwsered him.
    She stood there, slient with eyes closed.

    He paced himself with the dilema he faced.
    Can he really fall in love again?
    Can he really do this for himself?
    Can he truely be happy with her?

    With everything he faced with the last girl he thought he loved, he was left with a reflection he couldn't recongize anymore.
    He lost himself once to a girl.
    Committed himself to her in every way.
    But he signed his soul away.

    "How do I know you'll be by me?"

    "If that is to happen, it would be because you asked me to."

    Eyes still closed, standing in the middle of the room.
    With her arms crossed against her chest.
    He stopped and looked to her.
    He couldnt stop this feeling that was overwhelming him.
    Racing to her.
    Imbracing her arms against his chest still crossed.
    Holding on to her tight while he kisses her.
    He didn't need to ask anymore.
    Didn't need to question himself.
    Cause he knew things were going to be alright.

    He knew he could fall in love... all over again.
    With her.




    Submitted on 2008-03-23 00:30:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||



    Full Anime Episodes Streaming Free
    5 million youtube videos all rated over 4.7 stars with 40+ ratings

    [ Copy this | Start New | Full Size ]

    Google
     

    [ Chrispian ] [ Write Forum ]
    [ Friends ] [ SNESroms ] .
    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry
    This user has been inactive for more than 5 days.