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    dots Submission Name: II gemini II epiphany IIdots
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    Author: Syn
    Elite Ratio:    5.21 - 97/97/71
    Words: 65
    Class/Type: Limerick/
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    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    dotsII gemini II epiphany IIdots
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    Gemini epiphany
    don’t know who to be
    split in half
    and you just laugh
    at the crazy side of me

    Gemini infinity
    duplicated reverie
    we talk tonight
    in double sight
    of what could never be

    Gemini epitome
    pretty dual pedigree
    the first two cry
    the last two die
    and that’s the end of we


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      I can't belive no one has commetned on this yet. I love it and honestly I don't know why. it Just somehow drags my attention to it. It has like a paradoxical feeling. Though i am a Cancer i feel like we all have a bit of a Gemini in all of us. ^_^

    Cry

    And i really like that picture..... ^_^
    | Posted on 2008-04-08 00:00:00 | by WhY-dO-yOu-CrY | [ Reply to This ]


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