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    dots Submission Name: Another Mistakedots
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    Author: Broken Halo
    ASL Info:    22/M/ID
    Elite Ratio:    2.84 - 20/44/64
    Words: 259
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 158
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1803



    Description:
       To Robert and another friendship lost. Im sorry.


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    dotsAnother Mistakedots
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    Breathing fast
    don't look back
    run away from the only thing you ever really knew for sure
    stuck around way too long
    welcome's worn
    reality born

    Now you're leaving
    harder than you thought
    dont like the feeling
    of being caught

    Guilt creeps in while reasons seep out
    reasons why you should linger

    Easy to get there
    bittersweet was your stay
    now its time to never remember
    what you thought you had yesterday

    You were told
    don't go near
    reckless was the thought that got you there

    Enveloped in the brilliance of what seemed like perfection
    you forgot what was behind you
    for your own ambition

    Harder than you thought,
    finding your way out

    Rolled the dice
    lost the bet
    do you regret it yet?

    Back up slowly
    try to leave
    on your way
    depart unseen, untainted

    You looked back
    miss it already
    the spot you once hated
    but liked for a second

    Can't make up your mind
    you're caught up in its web
    part of it now,
    in over your head

    Face in your hands now
    the way failure feels
    took a shot
    but you lost
    knew the risk,
    never imagined it'd get to this

    Want to forget it ever happened,
    forget you even tried
    thinking of choices you never should have made
    thoughts fixed on the times you knew

    The warnings from others,
    that's all you can hear
    as conscience would have it,
    you should've never come near....




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