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    dots Submission Name: Dreamlanddots
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    Author: xieno
    Elite Ratio:    2.41 - 7/16/24
    Words: 159
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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       i guess it speaks for itself


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    dotsDreamlanddots
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    I don't believe in myself as much as I'd like
    I still hate myself even when I hold my head up high
    Go to sleep depressed at night, wake up with a migraine
    Dreams create pictures that tie into a story mislead
    And so another fairytale ends and the hero ends up dead

    I resent who I was, I spent so much time on changing
    But after all, the mirror reveals the same god damn person
    You still have your reputation and you still make me sick
    I guess nothing matters when you're so desperate to change
    No matter what happens, a part of your past always sticks

    There's a thin line between conceited and self loath
    Sometimes I wonder if its okay to be both
    I live in imagination, but a dream is a dream
    But one thing stands and it always will be
    I hate myself a little more for every person who hates me




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      emotional twist , well written , it stance out nicely
    | Posted on 2009-03-25 00:00:00 | by JoJoCrab | [ Reply to This ]


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