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    dots Submission Name: life from deathdots
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    Author: eagle wing
    ASL Info:    15/m/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.21 - 29/34/24
    Words: 59
    Class/Type: Poetry/Death
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    dotslife from deathdots
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    from the ashes of death
    the seed of new life is born
    but unless cared for
    it will grow in the death it was born
    it will die just as before
    but if taken to new soil
    fresh with life
    then the flowers will bloom
    and more seeds will be sown
    before its inevitable doom




    Submitted on 2008-03-24 08:35:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this is so beautiful...and so morbid at the same time. it's kind of saying if you screw up and move on then you can stand up again. but you'll just screw up later...i dunno if i'm right. that's just what i got out of it. or did you see some dead flowers and go "huh. that's cool. lets make something out of that."? hm....either way, good work. simply smashing.

    i tip my hat and bid thee (an awed) farewell.
    | Posted on 2008-04-02 00:00:00 | by PoeticNonsense | [ Reply to This ]


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