Melancholy by BusterLILblock

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Submission Name: Melancholy dots

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Author:	BusterLILblock
ASL Info:	21/F
Elite Ratio:	3.51 - 452/270/50
Words:	110

Class/Type:	Poetry/Religious
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Yo...May we all be guided...Amen...

Melancholy dots

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Melancholy, a cursed thing u may say?
Nay for it is much of an elevated sensation.

When one's emotions have reached a state of vulnerable insanity.
For which He knows and His mercy to his slave is overwhelming.

So I ask from you when you cry, raise your hands
Bring forth what for me, you may ask.

This will bring endless bliss and salvation Tomorrow.

So again I remind you when in prostration to The One,
Realize your position of servitude
Humble yourself to The Master.

Speaking of Tomorrow not Today's yesterday but what's next to come

Oh Melancholy, sweet sweet tasting melancholy...

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  I love the 6th stanza or line, it speaks in the persence of TIME.
| Posted on 2010-11-26 00:00:00 | by Apteryx | [ Reply to This ]
  this reminds me of a the story of every pious saint(mostly female) i have read about, the first time u showed this to me, i didn't perceive its depth bcuz well i wasnt at a level to understand. Now it seems like the only salvation
| Posted on 2009-05-28 00:00:00 | by geekyslacker | [ Reply to This ]
  yay melancholy. it kool. gud job buster.
| Posted on 2008-08-25 00:00:00 | by DaGrimReaperess | [ Reply to This ]
  I don't mber gettin' it the first time I read it(mmber dat?!)...Cheyenne liked it a lot...now I know why...You did awesum...I can feel it...
| Posted on 2008-07-08 00:00:00 | by Jaiknob | [ Reply to This ]

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
It means a lot to them, as it does to you.