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    dots Submission Name: Terrible but Truedots
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    Author: Broken Halo
    ASL Info:    22/M/ID
    Elite Ratio:    2.84 - 20/44/64
    Words: 89
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 236
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 594



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    dotsTerrible but Truedots
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    Relation is a temporary state of mind.

    Everyone you think you love,

    you will forget, in time.

    And everyone you call a friend?

    They'll use you up and leave you

    with nothing, in the end.

    And you can't let anyone get too close.

    Those who know you best are always

    the ones who'll hurt you most.

    And all these things are terrible but true.

    I know them all too well because

    they're what I've learned from you.




    Submitted on 2008-03-24 17:56:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is a terrific but sad piece. this can be true, but sometimes it isn't, and the realationships that can outlast that are the most beautiful.
    And to be honest, sometimes you need those hurtful relatioships to make you who you are, and to douse you with a little (if painful) bit of reality and to make you wake up and appreciate things more.
    I think the poem is beautiful, and I know that it is true sometimes, so you definately get props for honesty there. Great job on the emotion of the piece. Quiet but sure at the begining, still quiet with a twinge of bitterness/anger at the end. Quite lovely I think.

    xoxo
    | Posted on 2008-03-26 00:00:00 | by blu_kittin | [ Reply to This ]



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