Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: RocketRidedots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: mekisha4ever
    ASL Info:    39yespleaseNV.
    Elite Ratio:    1.58 - 38/36/47
    Words: 157
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 879
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 815



    Description:
       Writen for my Rocket Man Shane


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsRocketRidedots
    -------------------------------------------


    We wait all week & We get well prepared for our rocket ride.

    We are starting our engines and power boosters are on ready to go on our rocket.

    We have every thing we need and then its just we.

    We shoot up in to the air so hard that our minds nearly are blown.

    With every breath I take you take two and we move all as one in to the deep of space.

    Our bodies reeling from the eruption taking us far way in this little dream.

    When looking back I just never imagined it could be like this so high and yet so low.

    The ride is always worth all of the exhaustion of the take off & the landing turbulence.

    You will always be my rocket man and I will all ways want to go on your rocket ride.




    Submitted on 2008-03-25 18:26:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    159449

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    Whiteout written by layDsayD
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Devils in the Details written by endlessgame23
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Push written by JanePlane
    One Day written by WriteSomething
    Dashboard Light written by layDsayD
    Linger written by saartha
    new moon written by CrypticBard
    Waiting written by Daniel Barlow
    Primitive Lapse written by Crestfallenman
    True Death written by layDsayD
    Red Barn written by rev.jpfadeproof
    4th of July written by layDsayD
    World I No Longer Want written by ForgottenGraves
    4th Season of Vivaldi written by HisNameIsNoMore
    I will call out your name written by RisingSon
    PEARL (Exclusive Poem) 10th Anniversary... written by Cordell
    Alone in the Crowd written by SavedDragon
    What happens written by Wolfwatching
    untitled written by Chelebel
    Summer written by layDsayD
    Wish written by Daniel Barlow
    Sunset written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Brigit written by endlessgame23
    Trails written by Daniel Barlow
    Treasure Chest written by PieceOfCake
    Neither Here nor There written by layDsayD
    The Promise written by annie0888
    Sleep Talk written by Queen_of_spades

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry