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    dots Submission Name: RocketRidedots
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    Author: mekisha4ever
    ASL Info:    39yespleaseNV.
    Elite Ratio:    1.58 - 38/36/47
    Words: 157
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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       Writen for my Rocket Man Shane


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    dotsRocketRidedots
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    We wait all week & We get well prepared for our rocket ride.

    We are starting our engines and power boosters are on ready to go on our rocket.

    We have every thing we need and then its just we.

    We shoot up in to the air so hard that our minds nearly are blown.

    With every breath I take you take two and we move all as one in to the deep of space.

    Our bodies reeling from the eruption taking us far way in this little dream.

    When looking back I just never imagined it could be like this so high and yet so low.

    The ride is always worth all of the exhaustion of the take off & the landing turbulence.

    You will always be my rocket man and I will all ways want to go on your rocket ride.




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