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    dots Submission Name: Havent I kept my promise?dots
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    Author: FallenAngelJC
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    dotsHavent I kept my promise?dots
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    How cruel can you be to me?



    When everything I am, I am because of you...



    Havent I kept my promise?



    From the moment I told you I love you forever and a day, till the day I had to go just for awhile...



    Was I gone long?



    To sit behind you, only to hear you say "I love you forever and a day" to someone else...



    Maybe it is my fault, but I'd like to share, that I tried my all to make you smile,

    Are you smiling now?

    Even when I know that it isnt me that is making you smile...



    They say give it your best and it'll be alright...didnt they?

    I dont understand...

    I gave all of myself to make you happy...



    Isnt it cruel?



    When reality is too harsh and too brutal,

    And it takes away my dreams as well,

    Because when I dream, I wake up in tears...



    Do you know this feeling?

    Was every single memory a lie?

    Was everthing a lie...



    Its painful...It simply is...I cant move...

    Havent I kept my promise...

    Havent I...




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    ||| Comments |||
      yes yes inspiration.
    only inspiration that makes me sad... =[
    dont u write happy poems?
    haha. guess not.
    you never do
    =[ =[
    be happy.
    but i like ur sad poems
    correction. love. =]
    however. you make me sad. haha.
    rock onn
    | Posted on 2008-03-31 00:00:00 | by deathbroken | [ Reply to This ]
      what promises are there?
    how many times that you are part of my past?
    some distant past that i can look upon and smile or cry about
    how many times has that past came back and became the present?

    yes...i am cruel
    | Posted on 2008-03-26 00:00:00 | by rubymoon | [ Reply to This ]



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