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    dots Submission Name: beautifuldots
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    Author: in shadow
    ASL Info:    19/F/ nightmares
    Elite Ratio:    3.27 - 531/223/75
    Words: 160
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 67
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1177



    Description:
       tell me about it


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    dotsbeautifuldots
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    tell me. tell me. tell me... guess what?
    i can make you beautiful
    but...
    i can't make you pretty

    i can change your hair
    your face
    teach you how to stand
    and how to smile
    i can make you beautiful
    but...
    i. CAN'T. make. you. pretty

    the right color
    the right angle
    the right light
    beautiful is easy

    it's all that ugly inside
    that i can't help you with
    it's all that ugly inside
    that makes you a nobody
    one more smiling face
    in a sea
    of smiling faces

    but come to me
    and i'll make all you're imperfections
    disappear
    and just like that
    you'll
    disappear

    come to me with all your flaws
    and i'll make you beautiful

    adjust the contrast
    the exposure
    the saturation
    correct for light and dark

    beautiful is easy

    i can make you a still frame movie star
    but i can't fix the ugly inside




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      Beautiful is easy... But you'll never be pretty...
    *shivers*
    AWESOME!!! -I loved it!!!
    You can put pearls on swine but it's STILL a pig, isn't it?

    I like how this was written- talking about the right colors and lighting and angles... Like; I can take a gorgeous picture of you. But you're STILL an ugly whore.

    "That makes you a nobody; one more smiling face in a sea of smiling faces" ...fu<king sweet! Cookie-cutter bit<hes... Every one JUST like the last.
    It's a MySpace generation.
    High contrast/high art
    -Ooops, guilty as charged.
    I go overboard with the photo-editing...
    -It does make me prettier.
    But I'm still the same old prick!
    ;)
    | Posted on 2008-03-27 00:00:00 | by Ceyx | [ Reply to This ]
      This is excellent, Rachelle! It tells an excellent story, and presents an important philosophical message in an artistic and poetic manner!
    | Posted on 2008-03-26 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      I like this work, its a good write.
    Is the speaker in the poem a Manager, Photographer, or Dr. Phill?

    The Poor Man's Poet.
    | Posted on 2008-03-26 00:00:00 | by Bobby K | [ Reply to This ]



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