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    dots Submission Name: sniperdots
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    Author: cor
    ASL Info:    16/M/NY
    Elite Ratio:    2.28 - 28/24/30
    Words: 55
    Class/Type: Poetry/Betrayal
    Total Views: 232
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    dotssniperdots
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    The sniper readies his shot
    preparing to kill
    his target without a clue
    knowing he will not miss
    loading the only shot he will need
    setting the stand
    testing the wind
    and when he is ready
    he becomes the prey
    shot by one of his kind
    he loses to the better sniper




    Submitted on 2008-03-26 10:42:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Ah, it is ever thus!! A nice twist on theme which has become popular in the past 20 years.... a fine short poem.... bravo... bravo... bravo...
    | Posted on 2008-03-27 00:00:00 | by Algol46 | [ Reply to This ]


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