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Abbadon Awaits A Response.


Author: xXCptn_SephyXx
ASL Info:    22/f/PA
Elite Ratio:    2.65 - 46 /119 /104
Words: 33
Class/Type: Poetry /Serious
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Abbadon Awaits A Response.



Promise to lash out graciously
With a fine whip of endless torture;
Only to lead down one path--
To encounter the entity of design
And question his flaws--
To strengthen his answers.




Submitted on 2008-03-26 15:00:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I like the way this sounds, though I don't really understand it. I guess I would have to understand the context of the poem to understand exactly what it is you're trying to say here.
Maybe like a "refined by fire" type thing? You know the what doesn't kill you makes you stronger idea? Just guessing...
| Posted on 2008-03-27 00:00:00 | by lovedeathsdeath | [ Reply to This ]


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