Abbadon Awaits A Response. -------------------------------------------
Promise to lash out graciously
With a fine whip of endless torture;
Only to lead down one path--
To encounter the entity of design
And question his flaws--
To strengthen his answers.
I like the way this sounds, though I don't really understand it. I guess I would have to understand the context of the poem to understand exactly what it is you're trying to say here.
Maybe like a "refined by fire" type thing? You know the what doesn't kill you makes you stronger idea? Just guessing...
Submission Name: Abbadon Awaits A Response.
