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    dots Submission Name: Abbadon Awaits A Response.dots
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    Author: xXCptn_SephyXx
    ASL Info:    22/f/PA
    Elite Ratio:    2.65 - 46/119/104
    Words: 33
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 1012
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 218



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    dotsAbbadon Awaits A Response.dots
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    Promise to lash out graciously
    With a fine whip of endless torture;
    Only to lead down one path--
    To encounter the entity of design
    And question his flaws--
    To strengthen his answers.




    Submitted on 2008-03-26 15:00:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like the way this sounds, though I don't really understand it. I guess I would have to understand the context of the poem to understand exactly what it is you're trying to say here.
    Maybe like a "refined by fire" type thing? You know the what doesn't kill you makes you stronger idea? Just guessing...
    | Posted on 2008-03-27 00:00:00 | by lovedeathsdeath | [ Reply to This ]


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