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    dots Submission Name: The Sand On the Only Shore Across the Seadots
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    Author: lovedeathsdeath
    ASL Info:    20/M/NCUSA
    Elite Ratio:    5.28 - 39/43/33
    Words: 148
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 158
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    dotsThe Sand On the Only Shore Across the Seadots
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    Oh princess of your castle,
    how long must I wait
    to see you again?
    I've searched my life
    knowing exactly who you are,
    never acknowledging you weren't there

    as your hair was blown
    by the wind and we stood in the trees
    knowing not we could see each other again.

    And the wind blew by the years
    giving way to our fears of never loving.
    So you saw your princes and I my maidens.
    And though we never laid in their beds
    we never knew the dead could be so enticing.

    Now knowing the dead are not alive
    You and I should strive to spend our days in
    the land of the living.

    Oh princess of your castle,
    how long must I wait
    to see you again?
    I've searched my life
    knowing exactly who you are,
    and I never want to leave your side.




    Submitted on 2008-03-26 17:21:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Tis sad no one ever commented on this because it is very powerful in its own way.. It has a beauty on the surface that runs deep as well.. I love the feeling of longing that fills this throughout its entire length and the imagery along with the repitition of the first few lines.. Wonderful job..
    | Posted on 2008-12-05 00:00:00 | by Maskannai | [ Reply to This ]



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