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    dots Submission Name: Untitleddots

    Author: justkillme08
    ASL Info:    18/F/MA
    Elite Ratio:    1.63 - 97/170/124
    Words: 98
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 600
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    I Wrote This
    & Just Found It

    I Met This Boy,
    He Took My Hand,
    Took Me Down A Road,
    That Let Me No Where.

    He Turned To Me,
    And Looked Me In The Eyes,
    Then Said,
    I Cross My Heart,
    And Hope To Die,
    For If I Lose You,
    I Will Cry,
    Your My True Love,
    My One And Only,
    Marry Me,
    And You'll Never Be Lonely.

    As He Kissed My Lips,
    I Started To Cry,
    There Was Nothing More,
    In This World I Wanted,
    Because The World Was All Mine

    Submitted on 2008-03-26 17:25:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This is touching. I like it.
    | Posted on 2008-03-28 00:00:00 | by Depression420 | [ Reply to This ]
      this is really good. its short and straight to the point. even though it is short is doesn't really lack much detail. i think this is one of my favorite things you have written.

    | Posted on 2008-03-26 00:00:00 | by kession | [ Reply to This ]

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