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Author: justkillme08
ASL Info:    18/F/MA
Elite Ratio:    1.63 - 97 /170 /124
Words: 98
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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I Wrote This
& Just Found It

I Met This Boy,
He Took My Hand,
Took Me Down A Road,
That Let Me No Where.

He Turned To Me,
And Looked Me In The Eyes,
Then Said,
I Cross My Heart,
And Hope To Die,
For If I Lose You,
I Will Cry,
Your My True Love,
My One And Only,
Marry Me,
And You'll Never Be Lonely.

As He Kissed My Lips,
I Started To Cry,
There Was Nothing More,
In This World I Wanted,
Because The World Was All Mine

Submitted on 2008-03-26 17:25:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  This is touching. I like it.
| Posted on 2008-03-28 00:00:00 | by Depression420 | [ Reply to This ]
  this is really good. its short and straight to the point. even though it is short is doesn't really lack much detail. i think this is one of my favorite things you have written.

| Posted on 2008-03-26 00:00:00 | by kession | [ Reply to This ]

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