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    dots Submission Name: *I Wish*dots
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    Author: Rex Gold
    ASL Info:    18/m/U.S.A
    Elite Ratio:    4.11 - 60/46/67
    Words: 215
    Class/Type: Poetry/
    Total Views: 85
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       I wrote it for a very great friend of mine.


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    dots*I Wish*dots
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    I wish
    I could take you
    to the center of the rainbow
    after the rain came low
    I wish, time could stop
    for us and just five minutes
    This place
    where stars form a bigger one,
    where peaceful animals see us
    then greet us
    Where emotions are'nt barricaded.
    Where feelings are'nt fabricated.
    Where 9am is always pleasant.
    Where 9pm the horizon is present
    I wish
    I could just sit with you
    as the sun says goodbye for it's day
    as the colors of the sky reflect on us
    On the shore
    our own world tour
    where life is brand spankin' new
    The sky, a grand phasing blue
    A place
    where Care Bears don't go,
    Poison Ivy won't grow,
    just perfect flowers
    Trust, a turning power
    for turning points
    A place
    where everyday I can wake up
    to your footsteps, you smile, your voice
    I wish
    I could build this place
    with my hands
    and the golden spots of my heart
    As a man
    The oceans of the sky.
    The kisses that kill the sigh.
    The potions that conclude the why.
    The glitches in love.
    The stiches on the wings of doves
    A place
    where free spirits are priceless,
    and run
    Nothing can be sold.
    Because everything is made
    out of love.
    (But why play God.)




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