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    dots Submission Name: *Thorough Effloresence*dots
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    Author: Rex Gold
    ASL Info:    18/m/U.S.A
    Elite Ratio:    4.11 - 60/46/67
    Words: 112
    Class/Type: Poetry/
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    dots*Thorough Effloresence*dots
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    My veins
    the train tracks for water
    bluish green carrying blood
    The birth and obituary of a martyr
    I deserve to run.
    I must save the personal attachment
    exiting my lungs.
    I must endure, the downfall of raindrops
    pounding this soil
    Am I great to the botanical visitors?
    Or am I frivalous to the advanced?
    If placed in a pot, I am trapped
    leaning over depending on the quench of thirst
    standing there
    with my roots needing inspection
    I must have self protection
    No bouquet of eleven needs me.
    I deserve an open window
    feeding me the rays of enlightenment.
    The tragedy of the blossom
    is that time will eventually defeat me.




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