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    dots Submission Name: Love of Life - Love of Deathdots
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    Author: Broken Halo
    ASL Info:    22/M/ID
    Elite Ratio:    2.84 - 20/44/64
    Words: 152
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       Love of life or love of death. Its ultimately the same.


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    dotsLove of Life - Love of Deathdots
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    You don't know what love is
    But you know how to raise it in me
    Like a dead soul winched up from a river
    How to wash off the sludge,
    the stench of my past
    How to start clean
    This love even sits up and blinks; amazed, I take a few shaky steps
    Any day now I'll try to gain 'composure'
    I'll want to get into death on wheels, one low enough....
    And drive to some cinderblock shithole in the desert
    Where I can drink and get sick,
    And then dance in nothing but my underwear
    You know where im headed, you know I'll wake up
    With an ache I can't locate, no money,
    and a terrible thirst
    So to hell with your warm hands sliding inside my shirt,
    And your tongue down my throat like an oxygen tube
    Cover me in black plastic and let the mourners through




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