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    dots Submission Name: Haiku for Rage (revised)dots
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    Author: Vampiric Death
    Elite Ratio:    2.27 - 133/159/91
    Words: 15
    Class/Type: Haiku/Misc
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    dotsHaiku for Rage (revised)dots
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    He feels anger rise
    within the depths of his soul
    The darkness explodes




    Submitted on 2008-03-27 03:09:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      oppps, sorry, kinda clicked it too many times
    | Posted on 2008-05-08 00:00:00 | by daughterofdeath | [ Reply to This ]
      Well, i won't say I dislike haiku, i just don't usually read it. This is really good. A lot of emotion in very small amount of words, or syllables.

    Nice Write
    ~*~katara~*~
    | Posted on 2008-05-08 00:00:00 | by daughterofdeath | [ Reply to This ]
      Well, i won't say I dislike haiku, i just don't usually read it. This is really good. A lot of emotion in very small amount of words, or syllables.

    Nice Write
    ~*~katara~*~
    | Posted on 2008-05-08 00:00:00 | by daughterofdeath | [ Reply to This ]
      Well, i won't say I dislike haiku, i just don't usually read it. This is really good. A lot of emotion in very small amount of words, or syllables.

    Nice Write
    ~*~katara~*~
    | Posted on 2008-05-08 00:00:00 | by daughterofdeath | [ Reply to This ]
      Peraonally I dislike haiku, however, this one is very well done, indeed! bravo... bravo... bravo...
    | Posted on 2008-03-27 00:00:00 | by Algol46 | [ Reply to This ]


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