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    dots Submission Name: Requiem Reefdots
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    Author: Sheakhan
    ASL Info:    20/M/FL
    Elite Ratio:    5.61 - 148/153/66
    Words: 121
    Class/Type: Prose/Serious
    Total Views: 65
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    Bytes: 785



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    dotsRequiem Reefdots
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    Like a ball and chain plummeting down
    through the waves I am sinking.
    And no solace lies there on the bottom for me.

    My future companions, the sealife below,
    and current the criminal shackled to me.

    I won't drown, I won't drown, I won't drown.

    But I'll sure as hell rust.

    Don't touch me, don't talk to me.

    Don't mention my name.

    I won't die down here alone, save the demon and the reef.

    I won't cry, I won't cry, I won't cry down here.

    Theres far too much salt water as it is.

    Spit on my grave, it is empty anyway,
    if it wasn't I'd drag you below.




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      Like a ball and chain plummeting down
    through the waves I am sinking.
    And no solace lies there on the bottom for me.

    My future companions, the sealife below,
    and current the criminal shackled to me.

    I won't drown, I won't drown, I won't drown.


    This is your poem. The rest sounds like pleading.
    | Posted on 2008-03-28 00:00:00 | by JenFlynn | [ Reply to This ]


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