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Velcro Man


Author: Imadjinn
ASL Info:    17/M/Neverwhere
Elite Ratio:    4.27 - 340 /348 /146
Words: 126
Class/Type: Lyrics /Comedy
Total Views: 1075
Average Vote:    4.0000
Bytes: 926



Description:


And the tour headed to New Jersey...


Velcro Man



here I am, I'm on my own
I'm unattached, I'm all alone
I've traveled the world from Moscow to Flint
my only companions are dust and lint.

Velcro Man, Velcro Man
Shoop Shoop Shoop Shoop
Shoobibity Bop bop

I've searched so far, and I've searched so wide
for the man who wears my other side
you bring the credits, I've got the looks
Oh how i dream of your miniscule hooks

Velcro Man, Velcro Man
Shoop Shoop Shoop Shoop
Shoobibity Bop bop

NEWS FLASH!
Rift Divides Foreign Nations!
Polar Icecaps Breaking Apart!
Grand Canyon Widening!
London Bridge is Falling down!
Frankenstein Dissatisfied with stitches!
Velcro Man, Where are you?!

Please bring us all back together
Please Bring us all back together




Submitted on 2008-03-27 16:48:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  totally dig this.
and i agree, as well!
we need a Velcro Man...
i had a lil beat in my head as i read this.
kind of David Bowie vs. Unskinny Bop.
good job, man.
~Syn
| Posted on 2008-03-27 00:00:00 | by Syn | [ Reply to This ]


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