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    dots Submission Name: I Miss Everythingdots
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    Author: Ali Marie
    Elite Ratio:    2.84 - 105/106/76
    Words: 108
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    I miss everything you ever said to me,
    I wish I could push rewind and relive every moment,
    I wish I could lie in your arms, kiss your lips,
    And I want you to love me with every piece of your heart.
    I canít wait to feel your hand in mine,
    I need the reassuring smiles and the random conversations.
    I miss your laugh, and your way with words.
    I miss how much you love me,
    I miss your insight and poeticism.
    I miss absolutely everything about you.
    Itís just too bad that I will never know what could have been, or anything that YOU want.




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      Just broke up with my boyfriend and yeah, I think this about sums up those feelings inside me now. Except for the last bit, though.
    | Posted on 2008-05-05 00:00:00 | by Maverique | [ Reply to This ]
      This is a very good write, I like it alot.
    Because with love sometimes sadness is just around the corner. But that's how love and life are. You gotta take the good with the bad.

    The Poor Mans' Poet.
    | Posted on 2008-03-30 00:00:00 | by Bobby K | [ Reply to This ]
      Such a common feeling. It's so often we feel so strongly for another but will never get insight on how they feel towards us. We are left, without closure, wondering what could have been.

    I liked this. It really hits close to home, so to say.
    | Posted on 2008-03-29 00:00:00 | by darkened_soul | [ Reply to This ]
      I enjoyed this,
    especially" I miss how much you love me"
    Isn't that what it all comes down to? You could sum it up by saying that.
    Only, it's kind of a "oximoron" because if they still loved you..they would still be there and you would not have to miss it.

    | Posted on 2008-03-29 00:00:00 | by Joybell | [ Reply to This ]
      Aaaah, this is so sad, Ali, but yet it is also hopeful in revealing how much love and the object of love gives meaning to us and to life itself! Well done, lovely lady!
    | Posted on 2008-03-28 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      A sad and most poignant lover's lament, highly emotional and very descriptive and overall wonderfully done.... bravo... bravo... bravo ...
    | Posted on 2008-03-28 00:00:00 | by Algol46 | [ Reply to This ]


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