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    dots Submission Name: nar-co-ticsdots
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    Author: Syn
    Elite Ratio:    5.13 - 88/89/66
    Words: 43
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 95
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 378



    Description:
       i used to work in a pharmacy.


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsnar-co-ticsdots
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    *twist*

    *tilt*

    ::5, click, 10, clatter, 15, click, 20, clatter, 25, click, 30, clatter::

    *tilt*

    *sprinkle*

    ::push, turn, peel, stick, peel, stick, plastic bag!, plastic bag!::

    *reach*

    *hang*

    Welcome to Rite Aid, fuckers...




    Submitted on 2008-03-28 03:03:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      wow.
    change "rite aid" to "cvs" and i'm right there with you.

    "give me my ativan!!!!"

    terrible!

    (the customers, not your poem. your poem is wonderful. ;) )
    | Posted on 2008-10-14 00:00:00 | by dizzyfaerie | [ Reply to This ]
      ha! i dont know if its the sleep depravation or what but i just laughed...and i woke someone in the house O.O yup im screwed.

    at first i couldnt follow what you were doing and then i was like oooh...ok i know this is a major [censored]y comment probably my worst ever -tear- but this is a funny ass thing ga ma gig...yes i know i suck ^________^

    though the font thing kinda threw me off....

    hmm im seeing things again arent i. Wonderful job hun

    all the love and such,
    Nikki
    | Posted on 2008-03-28 00:00:00 | by nikita2u | [ Reply to This ]


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