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    dots Submission Name: Bravodots
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    Author: LucyDiamond
    ASL Info:    17/F/Sky
    Elite Ratio:    3.95 - 365/561/240
    Words: 115
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsBravodots
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    I hope the figures
    that leap bounds over seas
    and pique skips through rivlets
    do not remember
    their premeditated conception,
    the writhing of two forces,
    their constant leeching of daylight,
    and the violent catastrophe
    that birthed them
    in the forsaken night.

    How can I bear to tell them
    there were those before?

    How can I bear to tell them
    there will be more?

    How can I bear to say
    they are simply vessels
    to an expected encore?

    How shall I tell my beauties
    that their mother

    is a color-scheming whore?





    Submitted on 2008-03-28 04:22:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      ta-ha. Your poetry always makes me smile. This was very eloquent and witty. It reminds me of how weird I feel whenever I try to write with a marker or a pen. It's just not the same.

    I hope you can forgive me for leaving an essentially useless comment, but I think I'd be disappointed if you changed this at all. I love it.

    Keep writing
    ~Venia
    | Posted on 2008-03-29 00:00:00 | by Venia | [ Reply to This ]



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