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    dots Submission Name: Self-destructiondots
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    Author: Piper
    ASL Info:    17/ Female/ Europe
    Elite Ratio:    2.78 - 31/41/27
    Words: 56
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 111
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    dotsSelf-destructiondots
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    You're staring at the sky
    As other people watch you
    Your scars revealed to the world
    And still you don't give up
    Self-destruction is the way
    Maybe the only way for you
    It's the way you function,
    The way you eat and breathe,
    And no one in the world
    Can take it away.




    Submitted on 2008-03-28 05:17:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Beautiful. Tragic. Truth.

    On the brighter side, a reference to the movie Fight Club, self-destruction is the way to go. You can spend your whole life trying to "improve" and never succeeding, or you can self-destruct, and always succeed. Sometimes we just need to fall to pick ourselves back up.

    I truly understand how you feel, and you did a great job with expression in this piece.
    | Posted on 2008-03-29 00:00:00 | by darkened_soul | [ Reply to This ]
      Short, but very powerful.

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    | Posted on 2008-03-28 00:00:00 | by illusions35904 | [ Reply to This ]
      This is so sad! I don't know what to say! Would that I could, I would hold your hand and let you tell me why a girl so lovely as you is so sad.
    | Posted on 2008-03-28 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]



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