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    dots Submission Name: Wild Life,Wild Nightdots

    Author: Soldier O_Tears
    ASL Info:    18/M/INDONESIA
    Elite Ratio:    2.25 - 41/129/120
    Words: 121
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsWild Life,Wild Nightdots

    i see a horror between a million faces
    I sense a madness in every pretty maidens
    When the coming of the night is near
    brutal image of teenage rage appears

    I'm well protected beside this cotton
    Heart and soul well kept and unknown
    against any violence that would coming closer
    I have my microphone defending my border

    The wildlife revealed during the night
    dressed in color which blinding my sight
    Who let these atroxcities on the loose?
    Or even let them dance in confuse?

    Lets breaking the bar and cage
    Let us be mingled in chaotic rage

    I will be your messiah of despair
    Prophet of urban decay and alienation
    Let us praise,let us praise!

    Submitted on 2008-03-28 09:40:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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