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    Author: isaiahc4
    ASL Info:    26/M/TX
    Elite Ratio:    3.26 - 120/198/62
    Words: 172
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 616
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    I'm sorry for the suffering
    you have endured.
    I appologise for making you
    feel so insecure.

    I'm sorry when it's over
    just for being me,
    and for everything to you
    I could never be.

    I wish I could help you see
    that I couldn't understand
    but you have to know by now
    I'm a simple man.

    I'm sorry you couldn't be
    all I saw you as.
    and that you threw away
    our future and for your past.

    I'm sorry that you cheated
    I'm sorry I can't wait.
    I'm sorry for having to say
    I feel it's far too late.

    Maybe in the future
    things will change my mind.
    but I can't shake the feeling
    there's better things to find

    I need someone to love me
    beyond what you have shown.
    I need someone that can make me
    not feel so alone.

    There it's out I said it
    take it as you may.
    I pomise I won't look back
    as I walk away.




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      this one is really good. i can tell it's from the heart... which kinda makes it sad too. i'm sorry you're having to go through this michael. i wish there were something i could do.. just be an ear when you need it ya know? but i don't want to cause MORE problems... *sigh*

    good poem.
    | Posted on 2008-04-03 00:00:00 | by Holy Wood | [ Reply to This ]


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