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    Author: Vampiric Death
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    Words: 67
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Description:
       written for my grandpa who had 2 heart attacks on the 13th of March. He is doing ok now...


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    dotsStaydots
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    As I sit and reflect,
    all I really know
    is that I may soon lose you
    and I don't want you to go.

    Father of my father,
    in spirit remain strong.
    Hold steady in faith,
    I pray your time left is long.

    You may feel discouraged,
    but do not lose hope.
    The Lord only deals to us
    that with which we can cope.




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