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    dots Submission Name: Lestatdots
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    Author: Vampiric Death
    Elite Ratio:    2.27 - 133/159/91
    Words: 34
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsLestatdots
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    Lying in wait for my prey,
    ending his life with glee,
    stealing blood for life and
    taking all that I want.
    Any other would give up,
    that is why I AM Lestat.




    Submitted on 2008-03-29 01:13:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Would you really, really give up all others? There is someone in your life who will surely give up themselves and all others for you?

    Other than that little rant, I really think you could have went into further detail on this one as we both know that you connected well with the character.

    August Cranes
    | Posted on 2008-09-15 00:00:00 | by augustcranes | [ Reply to This ]
      this reminds me of this movie i saw on the sci fi channel...i think it was called "Queen of the Damned"
    I'm not sure though. but yeah, this one isn't very...detailed or descriptive



    -Bella
    | Posted on 2008-05-09 00:00:00 | by IsabellaAurora | [ Reply to This ]
      Are you speaking of Anne Rice's Lestat de Lioncourt?
    -Lestat only went after the thieves and rapists in dark alleys, most of the time- thinking himself a hero- and only wanting to be good.
    I think you could have done better with this one.
    | Posted on 2008-04-08 00:00:00 | by DamageAddict | [ Reply to This ]


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