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    dots Submission Name: Baby Girldots
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    Author: Vampiric Death
    Elite Ratio:    2.27 - 133/159/91
    Words: 140
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 952
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 914



    Description:
       This is for my best friend, whom I have known for nearly two years now...


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    dotsBaby Girldots
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    I lie here and think,
    eyes open to dream.
    You still grip my heart,
    now and forever it seems.

    It was a mistake
    that I broke your heart
    It was not intended,
    I loved you from the start.

    You say you're ok,
    that you are not harmed,
    yet I can't help but feel
    I should be alarmed.

    Baby girl it scares me
    that I may have hurt you.
    Please know and understand
    my love is so very true.

    I've said it before,
    I will say it again
    "Baby girl, I love you
    forever, to the end"

    Forgive me, my love,
    that I was a jerk.
    I tried to hide my feelings,
    but that clearly doesn't work...

    I lie here and think,
    eyes open to dream.
    I am forever yours,
    I always was, it seems.




    Submitted on 2008-03-29 03:51:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i liked this very much, it flowed nicely and there was power in the words. you can feel the emotion in this piece i like it well done. :)

    ~maddie
    | Posted on 2008-03-29 00:00:00 | by BarleyBreathing | [ Reply to This ]


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