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    dots Submission Name: Watch as it Fallsdots
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    Author: BlazeFlamme
    ASL Info:    22/m/TX
    Elite Ratio:    1.81 - 23/160/138
    Words: 154
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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       Still can't sleep


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    dotsWatch as it Fallsdots
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    I see my world
    As it was paved
    I see the structures
    That I have made

    I see my work
    Invested in it
    I see it crash
    A disaster that's fit

    As far as I can recall
    I fixed my world around you
    Now a stone has come loose
    The sky is now falling through

    I see the wreckage
    The beauty it once was
    I see the debris
    The dying of my trust

    I watch as it dies
    The calm fades away
    I feel my distress
    It pulls me a stray

    I am losing
    What I feared to lose
    I have become
    A spectator of suits

    I no longer control
    I have no more say
    I have to let it go
    Let things be as they may

    It's funny
    People spend years of sweat and labor building structures
    It only takes a day to tear them down




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      I've felt this sad before. The good part is the feeling after it's gone, when it is finally replaced with acceptance.
    | Posted on 2015-07-28 00:00:00 | by happymoon | [ Reply to This ]


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